Comments by Phil Corriveau

Comment for "At Home With Mr. Mangus: A Day in the Life of a Home Health Aide"

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Review of At Home With Mr. Mangus: A Day in the Life of a Home Health Aide

Rebecca Sheir has a real knack for finding interesting characters and weaving a tapestry of voices and sound elements that works perfectly for me. She is expert at extracting the very best from her subjects, taking human interest to a new level. The editing, mixing and pacing of the piece are just right, truly an example of good radio that engages the listener.

Comment for "Citizen Lawsuit Targets Foreign Ships" (deleted)

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Review of Citizen Lawsuit Targets Foreign Ships (deleted)

This is a straightforward hard news feature produced by Mark Brush for the Environment Report, formerly the Great Lakes Consortium. It is factual and provocative, but not particularly lively or hard hitting.

Comment for "'Til Death Do Us Part"

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Review of 'Til Death Do Us Part

Producer Sara Archambault has crafted an excellent piece that will satisfy the curiosity most of us have in what goes on behind the scenes in a funeral home. The husband and wife team of morticians come across as compassionate and professional. There is a very human element of "death care" which permeates the graphic descriptions of preparing a body for burial. The production values are a good example of "less is more"...sound elements and music are sparingly used but highly effective. There is a tendency when creating a piece like this to "over-produce" it with a barrage of sound that would not be appropriate for this piece. The high production values are even more impressive when you realize that this is part of a series produced by graduate and undergraduate students from the Salt Institute for Documentary Studies. My only criticism of this piece, and the only reason I did not rate it five stars, is that the minute or so section about how the funeral director couple met near the end sounds a bit out of context to me; it sounds like it has been superimposed over the rest of the piece and breaks up the way the piece had been flowing so nicely. It is interesting information, but the relationship between the couple is more effectively conveyed implicitly in the rest of the piece, in my opinion. But overall, the piece is superbly produced and effectively draws the listener in, just as good radio should. Well done!

Comment for "Muslim Cabbies Say 'No' to Passengers With Alcohol"

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Review of Muslim Cabbies Say 'No' to Passengers With Alcohol

This is a very well produced feature that was originally heard on PRI's program series "The World". It reflects the high standards of quality that are heard regularly in this signature program series. It is everything a good feature should be; informative, lively, sound rich, and topical, with a human interest element and multiple points of view. Todd Melby's narration is crisp and nicely edited, and the piece flows well from beginning to end.

Comment for "It's Not About You"

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Review of It's Not About You

This piece is very well produced technically with lots of sound elements, and it's fun to listen to, but very difficult to follow if you haven't read the written description. I understand that this is part of a podcast series, and if you had been listening to the series you might be more familiar with the characters...otherwise it just sort of washes over you, and you wish you could go back and listen to parts of it over again. Which you can do with a podcast, but (usually) not with a radio. It is a nice, well-mixed audio piece, but it might not translate so well for radio.

Comment for "Doc Merrick"

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Review of Doc Merrick

This is a first person essay narrated by producer Viki Merrick about her coming of age with her father. It is well written, from the heart, and a touching story. It includes just the right tongue in cheek humor. It is a nice, heartwarming piece, and would be appropriate for Father?s Day.

Comment for "The Miltyway" (deleted)

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Review of The Miltyway (deleted)

This is a fantastic first-person essay from producer Kristina Lund reminiscing about when she was four years old receiving cassette tapes from her father featuring him singing along with recordings of popular recordings of the day. What sounds like the actual cassettes of her father singing along (badly) with Richard Harris on "MacArthur Park" is hysterically funny and poignant at the same time. It's heartwarming and cute in the best sense of the word, and I absolutely loved it. The only flaw is that the music is mixed too high at about 4:15 into the piece and distracts from the narration. Nevertheless, I have to give it five stars because it is one of the most imaginative and endearing pieces of radio I have heard in a long time.

Comment for "Global Warming: A Climate of Peril and Promise" (deleted)

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Review of Global Warming: A Climate of Peril and Promise (deleted)

This program is part of a radio series from Bioneers, a "forum for connecting the environment, health, social justice, and spirit within a broad progressive framework". It features a speech by author Bill McKibben, and it's about as interesting and captivating as a 24-minute lecture can be. The setup in the introduction and overall quality is high, and it comes in a 28:30 format, just right for a half-hour slot on public radio. There are about two minutes of credits, underwriting and membership/store solicitation for Bioneers at the end, which seems a bit much, but overall this is a highly listenable public affairs program that is well suited for public radio.

Comment for "Generation Next: Citizenship"

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Review of Generation Next: Citizenship

This is standard BBC fare, with the usual high quality production values. It's part of the BBC's "Generation Next" series of documentary programs about what "youth" means in different societies and cultures worldwide. This program deals with youth citizenship and the ability to vote by people under age 18. I couldn't help but think the program would have been better if we had heard more voices from people under age 18. Host Robin Lustig does a fine and professional job, but I wanted to hear more from the perspective of the subjects of the piece.

Comment for "Freeing the Press, Episode 2: Josh Wolf"

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Review of Freeing the Press, Episode 2: Josh Wolf

This interview is part of the "Freeing the Press" series from the Common Language Project, whose mission is to "develop and implement innovative multimedia approaches to international and local journalism". The piece is adequate, if not particularly innovative. It is pretty much a straight interview over the phone, which results in technical quality issues. I don't know how difficult it is to get into a federal prison, but I think the interview would have been more effective in a face-to-face interview. It also goes on a too long, for my taste...it loses interest near the end and could benefit from some editing. I would also use music without lyrics under the closing announcements; music with lyrics fights with the content of the narration.

Comment for "Rock This!"

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Review of Rock This!

This is an interesting arts feature about A Cappella singing groups who dissect songs into individual parts and instruments and put them back together with just voices. The production values are high, with location sound, vox pops, interviews, and of course, the music. Producer Catie Talarski delivers the well-written narration, and the piece is nicely edited and well mixed. A minor suggestion would be to give the listener a taste of the finished music product near the front of the piece, instead of waiting until the end, so the individual instrument vocals are put into context. Overall, it is an interesting and well-produced feature that would work well in any magazine program.

Comment for "John Carroll's Take -- Camel No. 9" (deleted)

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Review of John Carroll's Take -- Camel No. 9 (deleted)

Commentator John Carroll has a winner with this biting, incisive commentary about the launch of a new Camel No. 9 cigarette for women. Carroll's writing contains a unique mix of sarcasm, humor, and serious information that works well for radio. His delivery is crisp and polished, and he mixes in some music and sound from some old Virginia Slims commercials. This is part of a weekly series called "John Carroll's Take" produced by WGBH Radio, and if the rest of the series is as good as this piece, it is certainly worth giving it a good listening...I highly recommend it.

Comment for "Tackling Electronic Waste"

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Review of Tackling Electronic Waste

Tight editing and crisp delivery characterize these daily 90-second modules that are part of the Isla Earth Radio Series produced by Catalina Island Conservancy. This module talks about e-waste, the lead, mercury, and cadmium byproducts of discarded computers, and how these elements are contaminating the environment. It is very well written and highly listenable; there is a lot of information in 90 seconds, and not a word is wasted. These would be excellent high quality drop-ins for magazine formats or as interstitials between programs or program elements. These are about as good as any short format informational series I have heard.

Comment for "A Priest and a Barman in Dublin"

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Review of A Priest and a Barman in Dublin

This is a soft feature about St. Patrick's Day, its religious origins, and the drinking holiday it has become today. We learn that St. Patrick wasn't even Irish, and he was a former slave. The feature covers a lot of ground, perhaps too much for a three and a half minute feature, and could be more focused. It makes good use of music, sound, and interviews, and producer Maeve Conran has a pleasant narrative delivery.

Comment for "The Person I Admire the Most"

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Review of The Person I Admire the Most

Producer Jake Warga has created a highly produced and exquisitely mixed feature about the person he admires most, a medical researcher working in Ethiopia. It was good enough to be on NPR's "All Things Considered", and it clearly deserves a national audience. His visit to his best friend in Ethiopia is captured well in less than six minutes, and the piece really makes you feel like you have gotten to know the person and the place in that time. The many sound elements create a rich and liquid sound tapestry, weaving itself in and out of the well-edited narration and voice cuts, making it a pleasure to listen to. If you missed it the first time around, you owe it to yourself to give it a listen. Warga also has an excellent web site documenting his aural and visual accomplishments at www.jakewarga.com...check it out.

Comment for "Public Radio Fun'raisers - set #1"

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Review of Public Radio Fun'raisers - set #1

Veteran producer Joe Bevilacqua has teamed up with Lorie Kellogg to produce 27 short and delightful skits as part of their "Public Radio Fun'raiser" series of entertaining modules for public radio pledge drives. Most of the spots are under a minute, with some running as short as 5 seconds. They hit on some familiar themes, like quality news, loss of federal funding, and forgetting to renew your pledge. Some of the themes sounded very familiar to me from my own on-air pitching, especially the one about imagining to feed the meter a nickel for every hour you listen to public radio. All of the modules are extremely well produced, and many of them are humorous. Having been involved in almost thirty years of on-air fundraising, I can say that these modules will serve well to "spice up" the on-air pitching by adding some additional elements. We all know how monotonous pledge drives can become at times, and these fundraising modules will be a welcome addition to your pledge drive.

Comment for "Mozart's Hidden Kitchen & The Tables of New Crowned Hope"

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Review of Mozart's Hidden Kitchen & The Tables of New Crowned Hope

The Kitchen Sisters have triumphed again with this highly listenable piece about a celebration in Vienna of the 250th birthday of Mozart through food. It's a delightful smorgasbord of sound, impeccably mixed and perfectly edited. Music, narration, and interviews with celebrity festival goers, including Alice Waters, owner of Chez Panise restaurant in Berkeley, combine to create a magical medley of food and music. Bravo!

Comment for "Can Your Lunch Kill You?"

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Review of Can Your Lunch Kill You?

This is a beautifully written, sound rich piece about the status of food safety in America. Producer Tanya Ott weaves narration, interviews and natural sound into a well-edited, nicely mixed news feature. She manages to convey a lot of information in an interesting and listenable manner. I like the style of her delivery and quality of her voice. This would make a nice feature in any news magazine program.

Comment for "Soni's Dance" (deleted)

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Review of Soni's Dance (deleted)

Producer Amelia Shaw presents a well-written, well-produced human-interest feature for the World Vision Report, a weekend newsmagazine and daily feature show "capturing the human drama behind global issues and events affecting the world's poorest children and families". This piece tells the story of St. Joseph's Home for Boys in Haiti, which takes over an orphanage where a boy with cerebral palsy learns to dance, and...well, you'll have to listen to the piece. There is a lot of information, perhaps too much, but the piece makes good use of live sound and is nicely mixed, and captures the flavor of a dance troupe in Haiti.

Comment for "Salt of the Red Earth" (deleted)

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Review of Salt of the Red Earth (deleted)

This is a listenable half-hour program about centenarians in Oklahoma, highlighting an exhibit of photographs titled "Salt of the Red Earth". It consists of an engaging 19-minute interview with photographer Mary Jane Alexander, a shorter interview with Reverend Richard Zigler of the Centenarian Club of Oklahoma, and actualities from several of the centenarians. The main interview is good, but drags a bit after the first 12 minutes or so. Photographer Mary Jane Alexander says "you have a sense of place that you wouldn't expect in a face..." and this piece does capture of sense of place in Oklahoma. I think the program would be more effective if the cuts from the centenarians with their stories were interspersed within the interviews, perhaps with some music. As it is, the listener begins to lose interest midway through the first interview, and might not make it to the end, where the centenarian voice cuts are. Overall, a solid and well-produced program.

Comment for "Greg Palast - GMO's in Iraq!"

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Review of Greg Palast - GMO's in Iraq!

This is a straight 29-minute interview over the phone with Greg Palast. It's hard to go wrong with Palast, as he always gives good interview, and interviewer Dr. Shamaan Eagle does a fine job of moving the interview along. The program suffers from very poor audio quality, though, both from the phone line and from the studio microphone. It's difficult to go too far off track with a good guest and a good topic, but an investment in ISDN lines would make this a more listenable half hour live interview, and some judicious editing would make it even better.

Comment for "Being Leah Bloom"

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Review of Being Leah Bloom

This piece was produced as a podcast for nextbook.org, an online Jewish culture magazine, and it is very well done. Producer Julie Subrin talks with Leah Bloom, who was born in Korea and adopted by Jewish American parents. The piece deals with growing up Korean-American and Jewish, and not being part Asian and part Jewish, but entirely both, and how difficult it is to be both at the same time. It's a good soft feature, but I found myself wanting to hear from her parents, or from another perspective, in order to bring more focus to her situation. It would be timely for Adoption Awareness Month, and although it was produced as a podcast, it would work for radio as well.

Comment for "Holiday Loan-Sharking"

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Review of Holiday Loan-Sharking

This is a nicely edited piece about high interest "Pay Stub Loans" that are targeted to low income individuals as a way to get cash for holiday shopping. The narration and actualities are well done, and the piece flows well right up to the end, which is rather abrupt. If a closing could be added to this piece, it would fit well into a news magazine program.

Comment for "Phil Harding of the BBC World Service, on "The Future of Public Radio" -- on ThoughtCast!" (deleted)

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Review of Phil Harding of the BBC World Service, on "The Future of Public Radio" -- on ThoughtCast! (deleted)

This is a rambling, seven-minute straight interview with Phil Harding of the BBC at the 2006 Public Radio Program Director's conference. Phil Harding is very insightful, but the questions are somewhat leading, ranging from whether the BBC is in competition with American Public Radio, to the BBC coverage of the events of September 11, to whether NPR is biased to the left. There is no particular focus to the interview. This might be good raw material that could be edited and used in a feature piece, but as it is, it is not suitable for broadcast.

Comment for "AIDS in Rural Georgia"

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Review of AIDS in Rural Georgia

Producer Philip Graitcer has formal training in medicine and public health, and it shows in how well his features on health issues are produced. This piece covers a lot of ground in three and a half minutes, about the decline in urban cases of AIDS, with a surge in new cases in rural Georgia. The piece is a nice mix of interviews and narration, and Graitcer's delivery is spot on. He is a skillful editor, and presents a lot of information in a very listenable style. This piece would work well in any magazine program.

Comment for "The All Pets Radio Show (Pampering Pets at the Holidays)" (deleted)

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Review of The All Pets Radio Show (Pampering Pets at the Holidays) (deleted)

"All Pets Radio" is a great (commercial) web site, with articles, photos, blogs and podcasts about pets. The radio program, however, is not as good as the web site, in my opinion. The co-hosts are not radio professionals, and they rely heavily on forced humor and banter. Surprisingly, there is also not much information in the program either, at least not as compared with the web site. The best parts are the interviews, but they tend to be a bit drawn out and could use some editing. This program would be a good podcast for someone who is interested in the topic, but I don't think it translates very well for radio.

Comment for "What Now?"

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Review of What Now?

I had not heard of "War News Radio" until I reviewed this piece, and I must say that I am very impressed. This weekly half-hour magazine program is produced by students at Swarthmore College and distributed via the internet, but it sounds very professional and is certainly broadcast quality. The stated goal of the series is to produce news and features on the wars in Iraq and Afghanistan, and "fill the gaps in the media's coverage by airing new perspectives, both personal and historical, in a balanced and in-depth manner". I think the program succeeds very well in fulfilling this goal, with a nice mix of music, interviews, a newscast, and well-delivered hosting by Elizabeth Threlkeld and Wren Elhai. Production values are high, and the program is well edited and moves along nicely. Is it balanced? Surprisingly so, in my opinion, or at least it plausibly strives to be. But I think that the most impressive aspect of this series is the fresh perspective it provides from a younger demographic. Frankly, it's a breath of fresh air, and one that public radio truly needs.

Comment for "Can Assassins Really Kill You?"

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Review of Can Assassins Really Kill You?

I like Paul McDonald's easy, laid back style of writing and narrating. In this first-person essay, he talks about how little many of us who grew up in a white neighborhood knew about Dr. Martin Luther King and Malcolm X, and about his quest to learn more about these great men. This would be a nice commentary to drop in during Black History Month, or around Martin Luther King Jr. Day. It's a straight read, with no music or introduction, and I think it holds up well as a self-contained piece.

Comment for "COMEDY-O-RAMA SHORT #44: "Sigmund Fraud: The Edible Complex"" (deleted)

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Review of COMEDY-O-RAMA SHORT #44: "Sigmund Fraud: The Edible Complex" (deleted)

Humor is a very personal thing, and unfortunately this piece from the archives of veteran radio producer Joe Bevilacqua does not work for me. The slapstick humor sounds dated and amateurish, which is disappointing coming from this talented producer. The piece may have some historical significance, but Bevilacqua's current work is more appropriate for radio, in my opinion.

Comment for "Santa's Barber"

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Review of Santa's Barber

Producer Philip Graitcer has found a unique twist on a holiday theme with this soft feature about a hairdresser that specializes in preparing the hair and beards of Santa's from around the country. The piece consists of narration interspersed with vox pops from the hairdresser and various customers at her shop in a strip mall. The narration is very well written and the interview cuts are good. I thought that the high volume of background sound on the interviews fading up and out and under at various times was a bit distracting and called attention to itself at times, but overall, the piece is highly listenable.