This piece is not only really touching but it is also very visual. The audience can really picture everything that David speaks about he does a great job on describing things so well and with such detail. The way he started off his story was brief and straight to the point, the beginning is what gets the audience into the story and wanting to know more of what David has to say. The music he chose to include in his piece is great it goes well along with the tone and mood of the piece. The only thing that I think he should have done differently would be, maybe adding his mother on the piece like interviewing her and speaking to her about how thankful he really is for her giving him life.
Review of "Here I Am, Saying Thanks To My Mom"
Carla Roman
Posted on August 08, 2011 at 01:28 PM
This piece is not only really touching but it is also very visual. The audience can really picture everything that David speaks about he does a great job on describing things so well and with such detail. The way he started off his story was brief and straight to the point, the beginning is what gets the audience into the story and wanting to know more of what David has to say. The music he chose to include in his piece is great it goes well along with the tone and mood of the piece. The only thing that I think he should have done differently would be, maybe adding his mother on the piece like interviewing her and speaking to her about how thankful he really is for her giving him life.