This was a great topic!!!! In my school the guys always say "YOU ARE NOT A MAN UNTIL YOU HAVE SEX!!! But I loved how you went to your grandfather. Your grandfather spoke with a powerful tone. One suggestion though. Next time lower the volumes of the song in the back or higher your volumes. At points it was hard to understand you when you were talking. But I LOVED THE SONG!! Great choice of music.
I really enjoyed this peice. It was very intresting to hear that some people live such sheltered lives. The way everything flowed was great. It all seemed to go together. I felt as though I was really seeing this for myself. This made me think "Is this going to be the same for me when I go to college?" I like it very much.
Comments by Natalie Marquez
Comment for "Becoming a Man"
Natalie Marquez
Posted on January 11, 2008 at 06:32 AM | Permalink
Review of Becoming a Man
This was a great topic!!!! In my school the guys always say "YOU ARE NOT A MAN UNTIL YOU HAVE SEX!!! But I loved how you went to your grandfather. Your grandfather spoke with a powerful tone. One suggestion though. Next time lower the volumes of the song in the back or higher your volumes. At points it was hard to understand you when you were talking. But I LOVED THE SONG!! Great choice of music.
Comment for "East Coast Culture Shock"
Natalie Marquez
Posted on January 10, 2008 at 06:11 AM | Permalink
Review of East Coast Culture Shock
I really enjoyed this peice. It was very intresting to hear that some people live such sheltered lives. The way everything flowed was great. It all seemed to go together. I felt as though I was really seeing this for myself. This made me think "Is this going to be the same for me when I go to college?" I like it very much.