Comments by Lisa Ho

Comment for "What's the deal with Adults and Coffee?"

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Review of What's the deal with Adults and Coffee?

In "What's the deal with Adults and Coffee?", Sylvia Hitchcock-Jones investigates why adults are such coffee fiends. She questions a barista and a physician's assistant, but ten year old Sylvia will have the answer to her question soon enough. She already admits that she enjoys the aroma and likes her coffee with lots of cream! An absolutely adorable piece.

Comment for "The Singing Substitute Teacher"

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Review of The Singing Substitute Teacher

Most students don't know, or care about their substitutes. In "The Singing Substitute Teacher," Karina Rodler delivers a touching piece on her favorite substitute. The personal piece gives insight into the unknown person sitting behind the desk.

Comment for "What Makes You Happy?"

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Review of What Makes You Happy?

The concept of "What Makes You Happy" is intriguing. Everyone has a different answer to the question. Although it is interesting to hear all these aspects, the piece could have been a bit more structured and complex, rather than being solely composed of vox pops.

Comment for "Bastille Day Commentary: "Mercy Buckets""

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Review of Bastille Day Commentary: "Mercy Buckets"

"Mercy Buckets" is a humorous story about a girl who refuses to speak her native language. Growing up half French, she found the culture and language embarrassing. She refused to speak French and acknowledge her heritage. Her mother pokes, prods and even goes so far as to take her to a child specialist to figure out why. A unique, sweet story on self identity.

Comment for "Party Chinese People"

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Review of Party Chinese People

"Party Chinese People" is Pui Chau's earnest attempt to comprehend Chinese assimilation into the United States. She makes statements on stereotypes, mentioning wrongful assumptions on her intelligence due to her race. Yet, she brings up stereotypes herself. She ponders why some Asians in America aren't obedient as they should be, and discusses her friends' laudable study habits. At the end, Chau blocks out the noise from a party, when earlier she divulges her desires to attend one. Perhaps this is her stance on assimilation. Chau's sincerity and naivety throughout makes for an intriguing perspective piece.

Comment for "Will You Go To Prom With Me?"

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Review of Will You Go To Prom With Me?

"Will you go to prom with me's" humorous subject matter is self-explanatory. The whimsical piece makes listeners root wholeheartedly for Phillip Baggett on his search for a prom date. Perfectly accompanied by equally upbeat music, the piece has an optimistic feel which makes listener know that there must be a positive outcome.

Comment for ""Take That Stuff Off Your Nails": Being Goth in a Traditional Family"

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Review of "Take That Stuff Off Your Nails": Being Goth in a Traditional Family

"Take That Stuff Off Your Nails" is a raw insight into a Goth's struggle to maintain identity in a traditional family. The piece puts listeners in Luis Leon's shoes, allowing them to experience firsthand the rejection he must withstand. Living in a neighborhood predominantly run by people dressed like "gangbangers", Luis sticks out like a sore thumb. People blatantly stare in their cars as he walks in his Gothic attire.

From the beginning, Leon's choice of words, keeps the listener interested. Using "my hood" to describe his neighborhood makes the listener wonder whether this was sincere or a mockable imitation of the "gangbangers" he deviates from.

The haircut scene between Luis and his father was beautifully crafted. The intensity and symbolism of the haircut left a lasting impression on the listener. The narrator's ability to express his emotions without using much range in tone was impressive. Instead, his carefully chosen words and personal Gothic music at the end, adequately embodies his frustration.

Comment for "AD REVIEW -- Orbit Gum Dirty Mouth."

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Review of AD REVIEW -- Orbit Gum Dirty Mouth.

The Orbit Gum Dirty Mouth ad review is admirable in that it analyzes the few seconds of an ad, for probably longer than the ad itself. The fake profanity which is essentially the core of the ad is humorously highlighted, albeit I would disagree in being able to watch "the darn thing over and over again."

Comment for "Zero Tolerance" (deleted)

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Review of Zero Tolerance (deleted)

Zero Tolerance is a wry indictment of a Salt Lake City school's policy towards punishing violence. It is articulate and charmingly self-aware, but it could tighten and support its thesis a little more. Despite some minor problems in unity, the piece is engaging and humorous.

Comment for "My Name Is Ryan"

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Review of My Name Is Ryan

My Name is Ryan is an extremely compelling narration of a teenager's decline into drug addiction. Concise and honest, the piece lets the tragic subject matter speak for its self. The sincerity of the piece is evident throughout and quickly draws in the listener. Admirably simple, My Name is Ryan is a vivid look into a life most of us could not imagine.

Comment for "Poetry"

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Review of Poetry

"Poetry" is a concise and touching retelling of a young Bronx immigrant's struggle to carve out a satisfying identity amidst a tableau of highschool cruelty and urban alienation. Quickly paced and energetic, the piece excellently portrays the chaos of young adulthood for a girl who was always more interested in singing opera than popular R&B. It also avoids falling into the genre's common pitfalls of egotism and self-pity and this helps the listener take the narrative more seriously. Our reporter has a very mature tone but almost never gets self-serious (even exuberantly singing along with Inspectah Deck). The piece, as a whole, could be unified a bit more by either dropping or developing certain tired concepts like "pens instead of guns." However, the efficient, intimate tone, and the compelling narrative are what stand out to the listener.

Comment for "The Day After..."

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Review of The Day After...

"The Day After", produced by Voice of Youth deserves credit for its intentions and its success in capturing the grim calm in a small town the day after a violent tragedy. Throughout the piece one can sense our journalist's good-natured eagerness to report all that they see and this does a great deal to win over the listener. From our reporter's ride into the town until their departure they evince a charming naivety (deftly describing the countryside as "green and grassy") but also a strong feeling of empathy towards the victim and his friends. This is no more palpable than in their efforts to stay unbiased when they find out that the student who was shot was also black or that his principal callously referred to him in an announcement as "the subject." However, from our reporter's obvious dedication to the story and the piece's emotional energy, one can't help but expect a deeper exploration of the story's controversy. It could almost be said that Voice of Youth created a piece with even more potential than they could use. That said, the compelling narrative, and powerful atmosphere of the piece keep one rapt, and that speaks volumes for the piece as a whole.