Inspiring story; unfolds slowly though. I thought there were plenty of opportunitys in the story for the author to 'fill in holes' and perhaps add to the suspense or at least drop some hints as to the outcome. Overall good plot, not so well performed.
This piece invokes powerful images of the depths of a man's inner feelings as he hits "rock bottom". Alcoholism, recovery, and the strong place religion plays in the latter are covered in the story. Also captured are the feelings of racing thoughts, hallucinations, distrust, panic, and the associated feelings of living on the edge of sanity. Excellent use of sound effects!
Comments by Gilbert Orosco
Comment for "Truck Stop"
Gilbert Orosco
Posted on July 08, 2004 at 11:35 AM | Permalink
Review of Truck Stop
Inspiring story; unfolds slowly though. I thought there were plenty of opportunitys in the story for the author to 'fill in holes' and perhaps add to the suspense or at least drop some hints as to the outcome. Overall good plot, not so well performed.
Comment for "The Devil's Radar "
Gilbert Orosco
Posted on July 08, 2004 at 11:31 AM | Permalink
Review of The Devil's Radar C1
This piece invokes powerful images of the depths of a man's inner feelings as he hits "rock bottom". Alcoholism, recovery, and the strong place religion plays in the latter are covered in the story. Also captured are the feelings of racing thoughts, hallucinations, distrust, panic, and the associated feelings of living on the edge of sanity. Excellent use of sound effects!