I like the use of ambient sounds as segways. Actually, the entire production was great. I also like the VoxPoxen but it seemed like the piece could have benefited from a wrap. It would have given the piece more relevance to have it setup and concluded.
The overlapping of lines combined with long silent pauses is a bit disorienting at first. For the first half of it the editing kept distracting me from the story. My recomendation to the contributor would be to sort of ease the listeners into that editing style.
I'm not really into the Christian stuff so I won't really comment on the plot.
Comments by Andrew Morton
Comment for "Pridefest Audio Postcard" (deleted)
Andrew Morton
Posted on June 27, 2004 at 02:07 PM
Review of Pridefest Audio Postcard (deleted)
I like the use of ambient sounds as segways. Actually, the entire production was great. I also like the VoxPoxen but it seemed like the piece could have benefited from a wrap. It would have given the piece more relevance to have it setup and concluded.
Comment for "The Devil's Radar "
Andrew Morton
Posted on June 26, 2004 at 01:00 PM | Permalink
Review of The Devil's Radar C1
The overlapping of lines combined with long silent pauses is a bit disorienting at first. For the first half of it the editing kept distracting me from the story. My recomendation to the contributor would be to sort of ease the listeners into that editing style.
I'm not really into the Christian stuff so I won't really comment on the plot.