Comments by Transom Editors

Comment for "Luther 'Captain Luke' Meyer: In his own words"

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Review of 'Captain Luke' Meyer: In his own words

This is a noble portrait--and worth listening to for the music alone. Having grown up in Chicago the Blues was the enforced sountrack of my life--as soon as I had a say in what I listened to Blue was banished from the spectrum. BUT this piece leaves me thinking that was a big mistake. Captain Luke's singing is lyrical--his remembrances of the 50's and 60's music scene are compelling. And, like a great song, a world is revealed in about 4 minutes. This is perfect for "All Things Considered," a show about music, or the artistic process, and so on.--Chelsea Merz

Comment for "A Family Yarn"

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Review of A Family Yarn

Patience and faith--in radio that is-- are essential in order for you to fully appreciate this piece as it betrays the conventional expectations of a hard feature. This piece is almost impressionistic as the interviewee becomes the narrator. As your guide, the matriarch Ruth Marchellatta walks you through the family business, the decay of Maine's economy AND she offers you a cup of coffee! ( What more could you want out of a radio piece?)

Listener beware: you'll have to monitor your glycemic index as this piece is full of ear candy: wonderful voices, the intoxicating sound of percolating coffee and the noirish appeal of Ruth lighting a cigarette.

When to air this? During "All Things Considered" or "Morning Edition" or wherever you can spare seven minutes and one second. Given the presidential election's nonstop discussions about jobs, the economy and NAFTA , this is a supremely relevant piece.--Chelsea Merz

Comment for "Mock Funding Credits"

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Review of Mock Funding Credits

Thank you. This was a little treat. We'll take it for our next fundraiser. This kind of work could easily be integrated into live pitching. It's better when we beat people to it, and make fun of ourselves. - J.A.

Comment for "The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Burnside Project"

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Review of The Well-Rounded Radio Interview with Burnside Project

Before I heard this piece I had assumed that I would write that whether one enjoys it or not depends on whether you like Burnside Project (who I must confess to not being familiar with until now), but this is not the case. The band comprises a trio of engaged and engaging musicians whose enthusiasm for their work is infectious. This well rounded radio interview is aptly named: providing an insight into the artistic process and the nature of the musicans' collaboration, and also revealing the dramatic impact of digital editing software on music composition. In addition there is ample use of their music throughout the interview for those not already in the know.

Don't be put off by the host's somewhat speedy and fact-filled preamble, (I felt a bit breathless just listening); he is clearly knowledgeable and interested in his subjects, and appears to be a natural fast talker! HW

Comment for "Pop Vultures #2 Boy Bands and Pop Tarts" (deleted)

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Review of Pop Vultures #2 Boy Bands and Poptarts (deleted)

I just got the difference between about 8 different female pop singers. In spite of opinions and taste every one gets their fair due - good or bad - and that is pretty impressive. The host and her guests speak their minds but they keep each other in check too - everyone has to back up what they're saying, got to have good reason to dis a performer, it's not enough to just not like him/her. So in the meantime, you get some history or background intelligently spelled out for you. You, who don't know.
vm

Comment for "A Pioneer in Writing Women's History"

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Review of A Pioneer in Writing Women's History

This piece is perfect for Women's History Month. It is also appropriate fro any programming about the Cold War, Anti-Semitism, and/or academia.

Barry Vogel interviews author and historian Gerda Lerner. It's a phone interview and that interface is effective because it adds a sense of immediacy and intimacy to the piece, which is highly intellectual.

Lerner covers a lot of territory: remembrances of growing up in Anti-Semitic Austria; her life as a black-listed communist working to unionize the film industry.

Gerda Lerner has a great radio presence : she's at once philosophical and very accessible. And Vogel does a nice job of keeping the conversation moving and expanding without losing focus. cm

Comment for "The Gadget Factor" (deleted)

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Review of The Gadget Factor (deleted)

Have only seen an Ipod, never used one, so found this very illuminating. Good production, good multi-angle reporting, from practical to legal to esoteric matters. Since the Napster wave broke, music downloading has been a hot issue. This audio doc looks at a new wave as it builds, and will be timely for a good stretch as either consumer, marketing, legal, ethical or music-related programming. sl

Comment for "Journey of Man, Our Migration from Africa"

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Review of Journey of Man, Our Migration from Africa

I can feel my brain mutating trying to keep up with the flood of Dr. Wells' knowledge. Straight ahead Q and A conversation, really interesting information and speculation on evolution and migration. (Creationists take your blood pressure medicine.) The production has some glitches edit-wise, nothing major, just slightly distracting cuts that would be less distracting were I listening while doing the dishes, say, as opposed to sitting still,headphones clamped on. Vogel asks good questions and Wells communicates fluidly, and in layperson friendly-speak. Good science programming, good points raised, food for thought. sl

Comment for "Stevie & Me/Reunions (by Design and by Surprise)"

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Review of Stevie & Me/Reunions (by Design and by Surprise)

These stories are visual and Barbara Bernstein does a fine job of holding one's attention.

The first module "Stevie and Me," is appropriate for any programming involving homosexuality.

The second module is about synergy and serendipity: the unlikely and recurring reunion of two people who continue to surface in each other's lives. ( a public radio fundraiser is one venue that reunites these two---this could make a good spot for public radio fundraising)

The third segment is a piece on Bernstein's school reunion. It has some good tape and to hear the trajectories of people's lives is always interesting. This would be good for a show about school reunions, or about the passing of time how people change---or don't.

With this hour of radio the sum of the parts is greater than the whole; broadcast these pieces individually.

Comment for "Oh Freedom Over Me"

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Review of Oh Freedom Over Me

Bearing witness to the forced blooming of courage in the arrid terrain of civil rights in Mississippi - O Freedom presents an intelligent document engaging me on several levels at once. The political, historical aspect albeit astonishing, crafted through testimony, is easy to take in, but simultaneously being pulled in emotionally to imagine: non-existent the most rudimentary sense of ease and safety, the courage that comes from a nauseating fear in your marrow, the impossibility to suffocate the human need to break the yoke. Black and white. What more successful documentary than one that informs your every sense?
vm

Comment for "Meaning of Life Show: Episode 1 - Music"

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Review of Meaning of Life Show: Episode 1 - Music

Solid production and very well-meaning. As for critique: Two hosts didn't seem necessary and they repeated themselves in introing the segments, holding our hands too much; the segments were solid enough to speak for themselves. Sometimes, the packaging felt a bit teacherly, and the writing theme-papery. Mainly, I wanted to hear more MUSIC. The TALK about music was often illuminating, but I wished to hear what they were talking about. I realize that an hour format lets the stories bounce off each other, but there wasn't a cumulative progression, building forward. A modular version might be worth considering, as some of the stories were very strong. I realize this is a pilot and that the series will develop as it continues. -JA

Comment for "Last Day in Florence: A Walk"

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Review of Last Day in Florence: A Walk

This would be a nice addition to Valentine's day programming as it's a love letter to Florence.

Listening to this leaves you with a sense of going somewhere, being somewhere and having to leave, which is quite an accomplishment for such a short piece.

This would be perfect for The Savvy Traveler or any show about travel and/or the bittersweet sensation of saying farewell.

Comment for "I, Flagpole"

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Review of I, Flagpole

Clever mixing of voices from the last millennium that feels timely right this minute. This has an Alice in Wonderland feel...whoa, what’s all this? The words and phrases batting around felt oddly comforting to me. Being reminded of the flag’s connection to our beautiful right to opine in a time of “homeland security,” is a good thing. Not standard fare, this tickled my brain and left the phrase "free speech" sounding loud and proud in my ears. sl

Comment for "Squirrel Duels. . . Offramp"

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Review of Squirrel Duels

Improvisations on chivalry and honor in the rodent world is the producer's description and silly is the result. In a good way. The piece is out there, it made me giggle. Henceforth I shall see squirrels, imagine them stentorian-voiced, and be glad for the perceptual change. And if I heard this in the middle of ATC or ME, I'd be pleased. sl

Comment for "Earned Income Kitty Credit"

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Review of Earned Income Kitty Credit

Cat people can speak endlessly about their felines. I know, I am a cat person. This commentary is mostly for such folk, but there's lots of us out there. Amusing, though not a laugh riot. Nice, quick, tax-time commentary. sl

Comment for "Alzheimer's: Losing a Mind"

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Review of Alzheimer's: Losing a Mind

Part one is a mix of authoritative interviews, the most gripping of course is a close encounter with Alzheimer's ( a Mother and daughter), but really there was only the one subject. There were some odd production choices, embedding a relevent piece with no segues where breaks for news and id's would be. The second part on diagnosing early Alzheimer's feels a little alarmist and unscientific - using one example of early diagnosis which could quite feasibly turn out to be wrong ! As we are told, even full-blown Alzheimer's cannot ever be 100% diagnosed without autopsy. So the focus was a puzzling choice. A fair portion of the content was an interview with David Shenk author of The Forgetting - his research is extensive and he is considered now an authority. But I sometimes felt some of his pronouncements a little irresponsible.
We are all living longer, there are many more cases of varying types of senility, early and otherwise. People are so very much more vulnerable to and desperate for any kind of information about Alzheimer's, and I left this piece feeling it somewhat alarmist.
In spite of this, there were many engaging moments. A particularly moving theme was about the caretakers, the syndromes of their stress and the wear of heartbreak.
vm

Comment for "Fort Hood Check In"

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Review of Fort Hood Check In

Good sound snapshots of the atmosphere around Fort Hood these days. A series of brief interviews that serve as pointed reminders of the home-front effects of war for those who don’t have friends or family overseas. sl

Comment for "The Penguin Goes A Courtin'"

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Review of The Penguin Goes A Courtin'

Delightful and wrenching (how is that possible in 3 minutes !!??) Like good writing where you find yourself pulling for the bad guy - but Goldstein doesn't let you get sloppy - suddenly you're laughing out loud, brought back to your senses (or completely out of them). I went away: the delivery, the writing,the music...
Perfect for Valentine's Day
...or Halloween
vm

Comment for "Civil War Widows"

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Review of Civil War Widows

What a subject ! I'm listening to this late and it's a perfect bedtime story. While neither widow has much to say about the civil war, it doesn't matter an iota. Their stories are SO captivating and eloquently revealed. Richman is an unobtrusive narrator: he lets both stories waltz to their own music til the end, when he reappears with the insider's quirky coda.
This is great for Black history month, valentine's day, and for no good reason other than a good story, like bedtime.
vm

Comment for "Aucosisco Radio: Ram Island Ledge Lighthouse" (deleted)

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Review of Aucosisco Radio: Ram Island Ledge Lighthouse (deleted)

A companionable discovery of a formidable and godforsaken place. A worthy subject and one of the speakers, the lighthouse keeper, an interesting fellow, full of the contradictions of today. I wanted to hear a lot more from him. Even thought it's about a place, I assume also time restrictions forced the choice: the place or the man. I think more focus on the lighthouse keeper as an obsolete job, or just a portrait might make a lot more use of the tape. There's a funny use of two narrators that I haven't quite figured out. It's surprising, given the piece is so short.

The content is lively, full of good sound, active description - engaging little piece that could be part of a series on place, as they present it, or in cahoots with another similar local series on Other Places. I like a vibrant description of a place, especially if it's unlikely I'll get there myself. vm

Comment for "Media Swarm"

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Review of Media Swarm

I loved this wild-ride sound collage. Makes you feel dropped in the midst of the campaign-trail madness. Small production note: There’s a whisk-sound at the end that needs fixing. This is a great drop-in for election heavy-coverage days. sl

Comment for "The Miseducation of Josh Frank"

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Review of The Miseducation of Josh Frank

"The Miseducation of Josh Frank ," is a great insight into the artistic process--the hard work involved and the sacrifices made.

The writing is clean and conversational and and the organic use of music is great. This story also peripherally addresses the universal teenage experience.

This could work in many contexts: sibling relationships, being a musician, teenage living. Also consider using this if you happen to have a ten minute gap somewhere because it's a good, strong story.

Comment for "The Breast Cancer Monologues"

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Review of The Breast Cancer Monologues

The statistics are oft-reported, but people tend to shy away or plain old flee from hearing about it. It’s breasts, it’s private, it’s happening to someone you know and you’d rather it wasn’t, hadn’t, won’t. This work gently takes you by the hand in a calm, reflective manner, and offers you a chance to listen to people who speak from experience. Myriad concerns are shared, addressed, imagined by a broad ethnic mix of women. How it feels to have a breast exam, to be diagnosed, to find a healing path, to have misplaced a prosthetic breast are only some of the subjects addressed through interviews and readings. The pacing and musical interludes work well. Good general information is offered for women facing or afraid of facing breast cancer, and for caregivers, family members, and even medical folk. This sensitively produced documentary is variously intimate, informative, even ironic, and given the statistics, it should be heard by us all.
Can be aired during women’s history month, at a time of legislative, medical, or environmental news related to breast cancer, as part of public health programming. It is an act of public service in and of itself. sl

Comment for "Myth of Santa (es43)" (deleted)

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Review of Myth of Santa (es43) (deleted)

You probabaly won't want to consider airing this until next Christmas --as it considers the ethics of perpetuating the myth of Santa--but it's a good spot. Ethically Speaking is brief, informative but not dry. It’s ideal for interstitial programming. There are a number of public radio shows that have a resident ethicist so Ethically Speaking is a perfect way for PD's to fill the ethicist void.

Comment for "The Same Stuff as Stars, by Katherine Paterson"

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Review of The Same Stuff as Stars, by Katherine Paterson

This is an excerpt from "The Stuff of Stars," which is a Young Adult Novel. The adaptation to radio is effective. The acting is also quite good. This seems a good fit for family programmng, and/or for children. CM

Comment for "Image Makers"

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Review of Image Makers

This is a great piece. Steve Henn, in interviewing a variety of experts, does a splendid job of exploring the business of burnishing the presidential image. The editing is clean and keeps things moving along; the writing is perfectly clever: not too clever. Although there is no mention of mattress sales this is an ideal piece for the upcoming holiday: Presidents' Day. This is also a great piece to consider broadcasting during the presidental campaign. CM

Comment for "Pop Vultures #8: Guilty Pleasures" (deleted)

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Review of Pop Vultures #8: Guilty Pleasures (deleted)

This was hilarious smart stuff -the hip ones defending their "uncool" tastes as guilty pleasure. and so articulate but like "totally". I wish I could get behind some of the music but hey, anything can happen. I'll be listening.
I would absolutely listen to this with my kids and they wouldn't have to be polite about it! (or impolite). Nothing slick, or fake or over produced. Programmed on the weekend, when kids are kicking around the kitchen, this show could absolutely last. Yeah, I'm moving over, making some room.
vm

Comment for "Crypto-Jews"

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Review of Crypto-Jews

An interesting story to try to tell- it's a little surreal, mixed with prayer and language and stage adaptation; a little puzzling to understand the plight to maintain the identity of a hidden religion when it is no longer a mortal necessity, in this country. Also, strangely, the piece ends with the beckoning from the rabbi which sort pulls it down a notch in terms of documentary.

I don't understand why you'd want to be a crypto-jew if you could just embrace judaism. I went back to listen more than once because I felt I might be missing something - and I think I was right. The piece is only 6 minutes and has to cover some history, a historical adaptation for the theatre, the practise today - and it just isn't enough time.
vm

Comment for "Carla Cook: In her own words"

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Review of Carla Cook: In her own words

immediately grabbed me. Nice duet of the artist's thoughts and her singing - keeps you present, waiting for more. Remarkably meaningful content in a short span - without getting too heavy or glossing over. Can't speak for the whole series but if they are all as full of talent and articulate as this - it's a prize. This should be an endless series - excellent respite for ANY of the mainstream news shows or music programming.
vm

Comment for "Lang Lang: In his own words"

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Review of Lang Lang: In his own words

Thoughtful producers provide two versions, one with a sweet scene – the pianist outside Carnegie Hall – one without. It’s just wonderful to hear this pianist talk -- he’s so excited -- and his playing is amazing. This is perfect to air around his extensive upcoming US tour, the producers offer the details. But as is the case with the others in this series, any time airing is fine. To hear these kind of pieces in the middle of the news day is like when the sun surprisingly breaks through on a solid gray afternoon. There's nothing like a little hit of art oxygen to refresh the soul. sl