The story seem to have great detail, and placed extraordinary imagery within my mind. The story has great pacing and allows the viewer do gradually become engaged, however, stating in the short description that "it was a stressful graduation" not only had me convinced to be more, but also had me convinced that there would be a certain overly dramatic aspect of the story.
Overall, nice sound quality, and i appreciate the lack of music in the story because it also allows the viewer to become engaged and listen to your voice. Which is why I assumed you had your own vocals recorded to sing a short piece in the story, which seemed like a pleasant pause from the calm voice of the story.
However, in the narration there were some p-pops and a small amount of distortion and clippings. As for the ending, I thought it was a tad bit abrupt, and left me somewhat clueless considering the story wasn't as engaging.
Comments for My Graduation Party
Produced by Nanci Olesen, MOMbo.org
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Vaughn B.
Posted on June 08, 2010 at 02:38 PM | Permalink
Interesting, but not interested
The story seem to have great detail, and placed extraordinary imagery within my mind. The story has great pacing and allows the viewer do gradually become engaged, however, stating in the short description that "it was a stressful graduation" not only had me convinced to be more, but also had me convinced that there would be a certain overly dramatic aspect of the story.
Overall, nice sound quality, and i appreciate the lack of music in the story because it also allows the viewer to become engaged and listen to your voice. Which is why I assumed you had your own vocals recorded to sing a short piece in the story, which seemed like a pleasant pause from the calm voice of the story.
However, in the narration there were some p-pops and a small amount of distortion and clippings. As for the ending, I thought it was a tad bit abrupt, and left me somewhat clueless considering the story wasn't as engaging.