Piece Comment

Review of Personals


First, there is a second or so of audio at the beginning of this piece, just before the music starts, that shouldn't be there; and also this listener is a little confused (and pedantic I guess) as the intro talks about 2 upcoming personal ads, and then 3 follow. That being said this piece comprises too much of the ads (from a few lonely people whose only sin is trying to find a date), with not enough input from the narrator, even though the latter is a tad judgmental, in my humble opinion.