Piece Comment

Interesting Topic


The producers chooses a relevant and interesting subject for their story. The combination of sound effects and information creates a well balanced piece. However, the script could have jumped from very playful to serious more smoothly. While professor Tim Griffin is knowledgeable regarding the question at hand(vegetarianism v. being a vegan or simply being a conscious consumer), it would be a good idea to include another interview to vary the voicing and provide additional backing.
Overall, this story is informative, interesting and cute.

Good work~