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Constructive


Jemima williams

Posted on November 17, 2010 at 06:14 PM

hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. I really enjoyed this piece. The diction was very clear, and the topic was unique to talk about. The transition music was very smooth and was used at the perfect time. Great Job

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  • "MA-162 Voice of Caution"
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  • Summary: I struggle to teach my boys to be cautious around strangers, and trust the world.

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