hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congradulate you on completing this piece. The topic was a great choice also. It helped show that Graffati is also a work of art. The diction was very clear which is a good sign. One thing you can add another time is more interviews, opinions, or narration. Other than that you did a nice piece. Good Job!