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- "All you need is a wall"
- Summary: All you need is a wall
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Constructive
Jemima williams
Posted on October 22, 2010 at 05:05 PM
Hello! My name is Jemima and I work with PRX. First I would like to congradulate on you on completing this piece. The topic was a great choice also. It helped show that Graffati is also a work of art. The diction was very clear which is a good sign. One thing you can add another time is more interviews, opinions, or narration. Other than that you did a nice piece. Good Job!