hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. I really enjoyed your piece. It held a great outline. The choosing of this topic was excellent, because this problem is hardly recognized. Oe thing you can work on next time is the clarification of your piece. The diction needs a little work, it sounded pretty scripted. The length of the piece was decent, bt try to get more interviews. There are three experts heard on this document, but only one who experienced it. Otherwise, this piece was highly productive. Good Job!