Hello! My name is Jemima and I work with PRX. I really enjoyed your piece. It held a great outline. The choosing of this topic was excellent, because this problem is hardly recognized. One thing you can work on next time is the clarification of your piece. The diction needs a little work, it sounded pretty scripted. The amount of time was decent, but try to get more interviews. There are experts, but only one person who experienced this. Otherwise, this piece was highly productive. Good Job!