Piece Comment

Review of "Poor Health of Quartermaster Harbor"


Noah does a great job in this story of thoroughly researching the issues he talks about and explaining them clearly for the lay person. I liked how he opened with the introduction of Steve Hayworth because it added a personal dimension to the story. It was also great that after Hayworth he went to a teacher who would have more “credibility” on the issue. I think it also would have been helpful to have someone from the county talk about the issue as well, since Hayworth blames them, it’s important to give them a chance to defend themselves. Noah does a great job with his voicing as well; overall an interesting story.