Posted on March 06, 2009 at 11:42 PM
It sounds like it's being read. At 2 mins,has dead air. It's very intimate, too quickly. Listeners need more introduction, otherwise we feel like voyeurs and just want to look away from a private moment. I'm not saying it's not good writing; I'm too distracted by trying to hear it, yet not wanting to hear it because it's too intimate. It sounds more like a journal entry than a radio piece. It's like YouTube.