Piece Comment

Review of Adam's Story


Great production. I like the mixing in of music. I think you sensed the need to mix it in because this was most likely done in prison and there was little chance to get actual ambience. The subject is articulate and has an interesting take on his situation.

The style was interesting in that there was no narration. I think this is a style that is under-used and you did a great job of it.

Very provocative story. The only thing I will say is that it seemed a little short and the ending was kind of abrupt.

Adam J. Vaughn