Piece Comment

Review of Juvenile Detention


I agree that with better organization, this piece could be much larger than the blurb the narrator has made it. Poor transitions and a weak commentary do not do justice to the provacotive, well-rounded information and interviews from every angle of this story. The conclusion rubbed me the wrong way as well -- I thought it to be somewhat bold to state that this is a "problem is likely to plague the state for many years to come."