Piece Comment

Review of Getting Raised 2


This is an interesting view of a teen that recognizes that having a family is not a bad thing. A good majority of teens wish they didn?t have a family and often act as if they don?t. It?s refreshing to hear a story that shifts the idea and speaks from experience about being raised in a very large family. This piece is heartfelt, although it could use a little editing to create a better flow, and perhaps some background music that would give some insight into Felix?s family traditions. Another intriguing part of this narrative is the part about what Felix?s grandmother has taught him about Hopi traditions and how growing up without his grandfather made him appreciate the family he has even more. It would be interesting to go more in depth with what his grandmother has taught him, and could perhaps develop into an entirely separate radio piece.