Piece Comment

Review of "The Thing About Being A Teenage Mother...Is That I'm Young"


As a teen and having seen girls at my high school pregnant I was very interested in this article. The quotes used were great, very sincere, very informative. The structure of this piece kind of threw me off, not having any narrative. While in the end just having the quotes worked, I think having a narrative structure and some background information on teen pregnancy and/or the girls you interviewed would have kick it up a notch. On the whole, I liked the piece and thought the choice of music was great.