The piece was very interesting, and covered well several aspects of the bus trade across boarders. It seems only to lack a little bit of context regarding the prevalence of this practice in the rest of the country or at least the region. A little historical context as to the growth or decline of the practice over time. The anecdotal nature of the story was certainly a strong point and need not be altered, but it would benefit from just little bit of expansion that would also add depth.