Comments by Nilagia McCoy

Comment for "Fatalistic Teens Increase Risk of HIV Infection"

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Review of "Fatalistic Teens Increase Risk of HIV Infection"

This piece is very well produced; the production value is good, and Ankitha already sounds like a professional announcer. In terms of content, the mix of research, interviews, and personal stories provides the listener with a thorough examination of a disturbing trend among young people, but also includes a few ideas for solutions along the way.

Comment for "Black Fraternities Aim to Motivate College Bound Youth"

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Review of "Black Fraternities Aim to Motivate College Bound Youth"

It's inspiring to see some young producers addressing topics important to the African-American community -- Jazmyne does a great job of choosing interesting stories in the news and providing spirited, insightful commentary about them. One area for improvement however, would be to bring in some more voices during the commentary sections -- for example, during the part about Black fraternities and sororities, it would have been interesting to perhaps hear from someone who is or was part of a fraternity or sorority. Another suggestion is to add more supporting evidence from outside sources to reinforce the opinions that are stated -- for example, in the adoption piece, Jazmyne states that parents need to be aware of the cultural, historical, and racial sensitivity that comes along with adopting a Black child. This could have been an excellent place to give a more concrete example of these challenegs -- perhaps a relevant story or statistic. These techniques would add greater depth to commentary that is already hitting on some good points. I look forward to seeing more from this group in the future!

Comment for "Fresh Greens: Teens and the Environment"

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Review of Fresh Greens

This interesting collection of stories produced by youth radio groups from around the country ranges from the personal to the political. Topics include teens reflecting on their habits and energy consumption, the racial divide in the green movement, examinations of alternatives to standard consumerism such as community gardening and freeganism, and much more. The pieces come in a variety of formats -- from personal narratives to man-on-the-street interviews, to even a phone interview with Van Jones, Special Adviser for Green Jobs at the White House.

Keeping a long piece cohesive -- especially when it is composed of many diverse elements -- could be a challenge, but the friendly hosts do an excellent job of tying all of the stories together. The piece flows smoothly, and the use of music during the transitions also keeps the pace lively. The technical production on the individual stories is strong in most places as well. This is a good showcase of not only youth radio, but of the passion and concern that young people have for environmental issues, and I highly recommend it.

Comment for "Media Minutes: July 24, 2009"

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Review of Media Minutes Series

In full disclosure, I was first exposed to this show because a coworker of mine was interviewed on it this past week about issues surrounding cable franchising in Massachusetts. While I was already familiar with some of Free Press' work, I was unaware until then that they had a weekly radio program, so I've been going back and listening to older episodes. Anyhow, enough about me, and more about the show, which is excellent! I would even go so far as to say that this series is a must for any community radio station, as it provides succinct but in-depth coverage of subjects such as media bias, journalism, policies impacting community media and freedom of speech, and other topics that are sure to be of interest to anyone working in (or a fan of) community media. The hosts are lively, and have been providing an enjoyable and informative five minutes of essential media activism news for the past few years.

Comment for "Generations: Cherokee language through art"

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Review of Generations: Cherokee Language Through Art

The production values of this piece are excellent, as is the story, as it takes a local-interest news piece and turns it into one with national appeal, specifically, how the Cherokee nation is working to reclaim their culture. My only suggestion for improvement is for the announcer to slow down just a bit; there is a lot of interesting material that is covered, and one could potentially miss some of it with just one listen.

Comment for "Youth and police"

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Review of Youth and Police

This piece is well structured; it makes good use of statistics in appropriate places, and brings in outside voices, such as an ACLU lawyer and a police officer, to provide a richer perspective. However, there is room for improvement on the technical side, as the sound on the interviews could be cleaner -- all of the people in the interviews had good things to say, so it's important to make sure that fuzzy sound doesn't obscure that. My other suggestion for making this a stronger piece would be for the announcer to convey to the audience a bit more of his enthusiasm for the topic. This is obviously a very substantial topic that has an impact on many teens, so it is important to keep in mind that because the audience can't see you, it is essential to use your voice in a manner that draws the audience in, as opposed to the more casual tone that one may use everyday. Aside from the technical elements though, this is a thoughtful, interesting piece in terms of both content and concept.

Comment for "Anonymous Baby"

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Review of "Anonymous Baby"

Teen pregnancy and abortion are often discussed topics, but this piece brings a different viewpoint into the conversation: that of a teen who has an unexpected pregnancy, decides to keep the baby, but then miscarries. This piece is a heavy and poignant look at a frightening and sad experience for anyone to go through, let alone someone so young. The use of music on this piece is quite excellent, and enhances the telling of this young woman's story. While it may have been a nice addition to hear a bit more insight into some aspects of the story -- for example, how did she and her boyfriend come to the decision to keep the baby? Did her parents find out about it, and if so, how did they react? Overall though, I give this piece a high rating as the technical production is pretty strong, and it takes a lot of bravery to tell a story like this.

Comment for "Reflections on Environmental Club"

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Review of "Environmental Club"

How can a small group of students make an impact on the most daunting environmental challenges facing our planet? Portland High School students in the school’s environmental club reflect wistfully on the fact that, despite the positive work they have done at their school, confronting global warming requires much larger systemic changes. This is an honest piece about that sinking “but I’m just one person,” feeling that all of us – from activists to the average person – get from time to time when thinking about the problems facing our world. One small suggestion for improvement would be to add a bit of music – some intro and outro music would make a nice addition.

Comment for ""My Environmental Impact" - Zoe Martin of Youth Spin"

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Review of "My Environmental Impact"

An insightful look at thoughts and feelings that are often unexplored in discussions of environmentalism. Zoe, a “self-proclaimed environmentalist,” makes clever use of humor and sound to examine the cognitive dissonance she experiences when she wants to help the environment, yet guiltily dodges Greenpeace canvassers on the street. She then takes it to the street herself to gather the opinions of other young people about the approaches that environmental activists use. The final verdict? In order for true social change to take place, empowerment, not guilt, is the way to go.