Comments by Traci Tong

Comment for "Women Rising IX: International Changemakers- Honoring Elder Women Activists (encore edition)" (deleted)

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Review of Women Rising IX: International Changemakers- Honoring Elder Women Activists (encore edition) (deleted)

Informative and piece honoring three Women activists.

The interviews are insightful. I can see how these women were profiled. They're credentials are impressive but so are their stories and ability to draw you in.

Comment for "DESERT AIR Summer Special"

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Review of DESERT AIR Summer Special

Sit back for a visually beautiful sound postcard that travels through the Southwest.

... where the winds howl, the tumbleweeds blow past you and footsteps deep in the sand echo past you.

There are times when all you hear are just the sounds of your desert surroundings and that's enough to capture you.

The pacing is perfect.
The stories are real and intriquing.

The narrator's (Ben Adair) open puts you right where he wants you. In the air passing over the landscape below.

This a beautiful and well-produced piece that is deserving of consideration.

Comment for "Descansos" (deleted)

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Review of Descansos (deleted)

Poetic and poignant.

Nicely written commentary but it suffers from the echoey or hollow tracking.

This will definitely affect airing considerations and it'll serve you to retrack in a studio.

Comment for "Melvin is Dead"

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Review of Melvin is Dead

Hilarious and witty sound postcard on the loss of a family pet who's older than God.

Great first effort and I encourage more entries.

Writing is personal and her delivery is at times a bit fast but very conversational.

Sound of phone calls need to be boosted and clearer as it can be distracting, but you get the essence.

Love the ending!

Comment for "Asian American Women and Suicide"

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Review of Asian American Women and Suicide

Informative piece on a subject that has been taboo among Asian Americans of all generations.

The shame and stigma of mental health are significant problems within the community and this piece only helps expose the problem.

The story begins in first person and is therefore takes a more personal, emotional story.

Comment for "Ocean Elegy"

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Review of Ocean Elegy

Lot of potential for this audio postcard.

*Actual essay is only 5 minutes, the remaining 2 includes Elvis and ocean ambience.

High marks to narrator Pam Mandel for her perfect pitch read. Good cadence, inflection and emotion. Pacing a tad fast at times.

Audio postcards like these are fun to listen to especially when they include ambient sound.

However,it does sound odd to hear ocean amb behind Mandel's studio and echoey read. She needs a better studio to track.

And essay is a tad long.

Comment for "Suspicion at the Dog Park"

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Review of Suspicion at the Dog Park

I came in with mixed feelings.

It was a subject that I hadn't really wanted to hear but it was so engaging and honest that I was drawn to this man Frank and his ordeal.

I applaud Neille Ilel for presenting this story without pontificating or trying to create drama.

This deserves considerable set up. And while it doesn't feel right for drive-time slots, it would be a good spring board piece into a larger discussion, say on a talk show on Meagan's Law or reform, etc.

Comment for "Accidental Joy" (deleted)

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Review of Accidental Joy (deleted)

It has the makings of a tragic, dark and disturbing story. Yet, Birdie Jaworski doesn't allow you to dwell nor feel sorry for her.

Her narration is reflective and at almost upbeat. She describes the rape in (her own words) short, plain sentences.

The writing is crisp and textured.

Her story proves that time heals.

Comment for "Mothers, Migrants and Maids of Honor"

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Review of Mothers, Migrants and Maids of Honor

Haunting stories told by domestic workers who face many challenges to their jobs and their lives.

The piece opens with the story of nannies who struggle to balance the affection given to their charges and duties to their own families.

Narration is presented in a slow, deliberate pace.

The piece starts off a bit rough but settles nicely as it finds its pitch.

It's nice to hear the variety of voices offered.

The second half deals more with efforts to organize and obtain more rights.

Comment for "Mothers"

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Review of Mothers

I enjoyed this brief montage of seniors relaying memories of their mothers, but I felt that it was missing something -- and I'm not quite sure just yet what that is.

It requires a proper set up which will have to be done in the cue. And the description that accompanies this track is longer than the piece itself.

I do appreciate and respect David Greenberger's work, however, and I would probably respond differently to the longer version of this.

Comment for "Saving Jungle Souls"

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Review of Saving Jungle Souls

Wonderfully produced documentary that reminds you why it's so essential to get the right sound for your piece.

The subject was disturbing to me, but that's a personal issue and not to take away from the story at hand.

This piece speaks to you -- as though you are the only person experiencing this story. The producers were very effective by presenting two sides, two different points of viewl, by the evangelical missionaries and by Ataiba, the chief of the nomadic tribe he's just left.

Powerful.

Comment for "World Vision Report - Cinco de Mayo Special" (deleted)

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Review of World Vision Report - Cinco de Mayo Special (deleted)

Little gems sparkle from this one-hour programme on Mexican life.

I especially enjoyed the stories that seemed to be more personal... told in a storytelling format than those often told in a straight report.

The reporters' notebook by Conrad Fox on the father and daughter trying to catch a train was brilliantly told. Very engaging, enthralling and excellent visuals.

The Aid Worker diary on street kids was also engaging and very real.

I appreciated the interview with the woman who founded "Share Your Soles" which was a raw and emotional story of how she came to help these shoeless, needy children.

World Vision reports offer hope in the stories they tell and the people they reveal. And they created a nice balance of stories from soulful, heartfelt pieces to lighter fare, as found in the tasty insects piece.

Includes beautiful musical bridges and narrator segues are well done.

Comment for "The Transdiffusion Story"

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Review of The Transdiffusion Story

A bit off the edge and will require a great deal of set up.

It's an interesting story, and one that I personally intrigued me but is this easily translated for general audience, say in middle America? Perhaps not.

Listeners familiar with the authoritative BBC news programmes will appreciate this backgrounder. But those not familiar will not relate and may be confused by some of the characterizations used across the pond.

It can be a great listen, however, with proper lead (cue).

Comment for "What's the Word? Women Warriors"

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Review of What's the Word? Women Warriors

Bravo!
Provocative and intriguing documentary on various women warriors -- real or fiction characters. Each story flows effortless into each other.

We're first introduced to Joan of Arc, a woman many learned about in history courses but there is far more depth to this story than we were ever told. The story moves well and holds your attention.

We're next introduced to Fa Mulan, who is a revered woman warrior in ancient China. Beautifully told by Shirley Geok-lin Lim. Pure poetry. There is a richness of characterization. It made me want to revisit Maxine Kong Kingston's book.

Finally, we're introduced to G.I. Jane. As with the other two, this story moves beyond the book and movie versions.

This documentary is not too long, it is of perfect length and is a model for other historical pieces... the right narration, clear sound bites and appropriately placed music.

I listened to this documentary countless times simply because I learned somethiing new each time.

Comment for "Tying the 'Not'?: Saying I Do Before Iraq"

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Review of Tying the 'Not'?: Saying I Do Before Iraq

Absolutely loved listening to this story told in the "When Harry Met Sally" style.

I kept envisioning this couple sitting on the couch talking to the camera about their experience of having their wedding day pushed up because of military demands.

There are appropriate and fun music interludes to help this story along and it only makes it cuter.

I only ask that we hear a follow-up of this charming couple when Greg returns from his duty in Baghdad.

Comment for "Getting Raised (Hour long program with 5 or 3 min. newshole)"

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Review of Getting Raised (Hour long program with 5 or 3 min. newshole)

There are some nice gems in this hour-long programme by KUOW's Youth Radio.

These are personal stories from a diverse group of voices -- ethnically, culturally and in experiences.

My favourite was found nearly a half-hour in and it's by a young woman coming-out to her family. Her story was engaging, her parents so real, her experience so heartwarming.

The overall narrator/anchor of the program engages in a warm exchange with her mom. Whether you're a parent or not, you can't help but identify with and learn from their relationship.

Musical interludes are appropriate and help move the stories along.

Comment for "RN Documentary: The Music of Lutes and Harps"

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Review of RN Documentary: The Music of Lutes and Harps

Great subject for a story on the impact China's one-child policy has had on life and social norms of the families.

Vignettes of now-grown children of this policy are powerful -- at times melancholy, at time humorous. Which just underscores the fact that this policy cannot be judged as a negative or a positive.

There were statements made by the narrator/reporter which I wished were fleshed out a bit. Such as how the policy has impacted design of cars, divorce and filial piety. She does go into great detail on the latter two but makes it seem that these are inherent in only-child households/families. They are not.

Filial piety is part of the Chinese culture and tradition, regardless of the number of children.

I am impressed that the reporter/producer included such a wide range of voices, particularly on such a touchy subject for many Asians.

Comment for "The Harvey Girls" (deleted)

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Review of The Harvey Girls (deleted)

A quick introduction to the Harvey Girls and their role in the west.

If you saw the 1946 movie version with Judy Garland, you may be familiar with the Harvey Girls and their background. And that only made me want to hear little excerpts from the movie to add some texture to this short piece.

This is well read, although the pacing is a bit quick, but it packs a lot of information. It's all narration with a bit of music.

Comment for "Nona Beamer: Hawaiian Elder"

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Review of Nona Beamer: Hawaiian Elder

Beautiful profile of one of Hawaii's "leading ladies" -- Nona Beamer.

The pacing is a bit quick but the story is not lost. The listener will enjoy the melodic Hawaiian music throughout the piece.

What I love about this piece is that it's not your sterotypical piece on Hula and Hawaii. It goes beyond the dance and chants and presents a criical look at a time when the art form was restricted to women and to students at a prestigious school for Hawaiians.

This piece is well worth the consideration for Women's History month in March or Asian American heritage month in May. Actually, this story is worth airing at any time.

Comment for "How To Fly Planes"

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Review of How To Fly Planes

Funky radio drama about the adventures of a "civilian" taking the helm of a plane.

Characters are likeable, story line fun and enjoyable, and piece is sound-rich.

My only hesitation was the length. For 10 min., it ran a bit slower and could have been filled with additional material.

Not laugh out loud funny, but amusing enough to keep you company during the rush hour.

Comment for "Home Planet: Love or Something Like It. (Valentine's Day)"

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Review of Home Planet: Love or Something Like It. (Valentine's Day)

LOVE IT!

Yes, this is appropriate Valentines Day material and why not.

If you have room for a 3:00 plus essay on what love is all about, then give this a whirl.

Crisp and clear writing that is sure to please your listeners. Will guarantee to put a smile on your face as you relate to the ancedotes.

This essay is not sappy or sugery and is perfectly timed -- just under 3 min. plus additional 2 min. of music.

You don't even need a long cue to set up.

Comment for "Speaking to My Heart"

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Review of Speaking to My Heart

Worth a listen and consideration for air play.

It's a first person "essay" by this young mother who yearns for a second chance at bettering her life and those of her two young children after she is incarcerated.

The piece is nicely produced with music woven through, although at times it's inserted to manipulate your feelings when the narrative alone would have sufficed. But, the music is not offensive, just overused at times.

Piece is also nicely edited. Narration around clips of her children and former partner are nicely produced and flows effortlessly.

Narrator is very articulate, mature and sympathetic. You are drawn to her story and you cheer for her success.

It would make a nice Mother's Day piece but also at any time.

Well done.

Comment for "Twentieth Century" (deleted)

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Review of Twentieth Century (deleted)

MAGNIFICENT!!!

Loved seeing this play on Broadway and thought it would be tough to translate for radio. But, no problem there.

The pacing is quick and you're quickly caught up in the story.

Characters come to life and it's as though you've got front row seats to this amusing, quick-witted and thoroughly entertaining programme.

If you're thinking of trying out a radio drama/comedy for your listening audience -- give this one a whirl. Guarantee to be a hit.

p.s. I listened to this three times.. because it was so fun... not because I didn't have the time or needed to catch up.

Comment for "Peace Talks Radio: Seeking Peace On Earth-The Peace Talks Radio 2005 Special (59:00/54:00)"

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Review of Seeking Peace On Earth: The Peace Talks Radio 2005 Special

Bravo! There's something for every format, holiday or no holiday, ala carte or a whole segment.

The concept -- Seeking Peace on Earth has been done before by news teams and shows, but never as comprehensive and as engaging as this program.

Each segment has its own golden nugget and will at times leave your audience sentimental but inspired and satisfied.

Segment 2 , which is supposed to be the newscast hole, introduces the audience to the Iroquois Indian lesson that peacemakers don't have an agenda -- just ending the conflict. If you don't have a lot of time to fill, and want something that fits neatly in your schedule, this should do nicely.

Segment 3 includes segments with Yolanda King and Parenting expert Ruth Beaglehole. Both are engaging, informative and just make you want to hear more... especially Beaglehole if you're a parent. Common sense.

Segment 4 is one of those "driveway moments," particularly the first story on the Middle Eastern teenage girls at a summer Peace Camp. Their stories are moving and highly emotional. It's a story that you can play separately.

Segment 5, the last segment, includes a haunting interview with musician Steve Earle.

The stories are presented in such a way that programmers can play during most blocks.

Comment for "What's the Word? W. E. B. Du Bois"

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Review of What's the Word? W. E. B. Du Bois

Impressive profile of W.E.B. Du Bois.

It is ideal to run during Black History Month, or any time for that matter as his story deserves to be heard.

Throughout this 29-minute piece, you hear from three intellectuals/academics who explore the different phases of Du Bois' life and his influence.

Sprinkled throughout are short excerpts from a 1961 interivew of Du Bois. I wanted to hear more.

If you're going to profile one of the most important African American leaders in the 20th century, let's hear more of him.

The most interesting part of this piece is hearing Du Bois on the subject of lynching.

Producer Sally Placksin does a solid job but perhaps more texture could have been added to this piece by having additional readings of Du Bois' writings.

The final interview with Cheryl Gilkes is also engaging and passionate.

Comment for "Juvenile Detention"

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Review of Juvenile Detention

Story has great potential... but needs a harder edit.

Very fact-based and at times too overloaded.

Keep one thought, one main point per sentence.

Yes, you hear the voices of a former detainee, a youth mentor and an advocate but I would have like to hear a more personal story. Keep me caring about the subject.

Reporter has tremendous potential to turn this into a great piece if given the chance to work with an editor.

Comment for "RN Documentary: Durga's Court"

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Review of RN Documentary: Durga's Court

Engaging 30-min. documentary that keeps you wanting to hear more.

It's the stories of Shabnam Ramaswamy that keep you listening and have you laughing from one minute to outraged the next.

Ramaswamy was chosen to run an informal court in her small Indian village. She may not have the proper legal training but she commands respect from her villagers as well as listeners to this piece.

There is no host cue and there is an interruption in the middle for station ident. But this is definitely worth airing during a weekend or evening news magazine programme.

Comment for "RN Documentary: A Life of Ashes: Widows in India"

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Review of RN Documentary: A Life of Ashes: Widows in India

A window to the sad existence of Indian widows.

This is a very moving, thorough story that is well narrated.
Good attention to detail -- visually and verbally.
Well placed sound takes you from scene to scene - you feel like you're watching the story nstead of just hearing it.

The stories from the widows are heartbreaking yet matter of fact.

Some of the Indian women interviewed are a bit hard to understand at times but you get their essence and you never stray from the storyline.

Timing might be long for some station formats.
But if you have room on the weekend or evening shows, this is worth it.

Comment for "Condoms in School" (deleted)

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Review of Condoms in School (deleted)

Premise is good, execution needs polishing.

Reporter Erick Villeda introduction was a bit muddy to understand but you got the point.

Next is a vox pop of what I think was a mix of students and faculty. It's unfortunate that we never know who was polled -- whether this was a diverse group -- ethnic, religious, socio-economic, sexual orientation, age.

Then in the middle is a narration from a reporter who is never identified until the very end when Erick socs out.

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Comment for "Crossing East: Hawaiian Slack Key Guitar"

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Review of Crossing East: Hawaiian Slack Key Guitar

Nice show ender or listening in rush hour traffic.

Dmae Roberts does a good job capturing the essence and the beauty of the Hawaiian slack key guitar.

She scores some of the island's best musicians for this piece and that only made me want to hear more of the guitar.

Let me say that she does a good job balancing between her explainations, the interviews and the music but for a music piece, I always want to hear more tunes.

One other point, several longtime slack key guitarists were mentioned in an actuality, but many listeners may need an added reference to who these musicians are.

Still, this is a lovely piece and Dmae's read is beautiful and melodious. A perfect match for this story.