One of the good things about this piece is that it takes us to a place where we usually don't go - at least during those working hours. Having said that,I agree with Dmae, generally. I think the listener may feel like he is in the market but I think it's like he's always talking to the workers and never standing by, "just watching" them working. How can I say it? There's some background action that could take the front line here and there, something like that. But, even so, it was a nice tour for me, "over the ocean".