Comments by Jemima williams

Comment for "Where do you go to find peace?"

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Hello my name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congratulate you on creating this radio documentary piece. This is taking a step into journalism, by sharing and expressing yourself. I would suggest the diction to be a bit clearer, and transition music. Other than that you did good. Great Job!

Comment for "Santa Kidnapped: A Radio Rootz Radio Drama Parody"

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Hello my name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This piece was fantastic! The script was great. The transition music was perfect for the moments. Congratulations on creating this piece. Great Job!

Comment for "How to Confront a Bully"

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hello my name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congratulate you on completing your radio documentary. This a very serious subject, and it is good that you choose to express your wisdom on this topic. I would suggest next time to elaborate more on the topic of your choice. Also choose music that would agree with the tone of the subject your discussing. Otherwise, you completed a fine piece of work. Great Job!

Comment for "Green Fashion Designers"

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Hello my name is Jemima, Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congratulate you on creating this radio documentary. I actually like this documentary, it is very interesting. Your diction was very clear. I would only suggest music to transition your topics. Good Job!

Comment for "Support for LGBT youth in Anchorage"

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Hello my name is Jemima, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congratulate you on completing this documentary. This is a very strong topic where many people agree, and can relate to you. I'm glad you among many are speaking up. I would use transition music, other than that it was good. Great Job!

Comment for "Back of the Head"

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Hello My name is Jemima, and I would like to congratulate you on completing this piece. I actually appreciate you chose this topic to do. Stereotypes are an unfortunate judgement, and is wrong to commit. Your diction was very clear, along with the tone in your voice. I would suggest a bit of transition music next time though. Great Job!

Comment for "One Trillion Dollar$"

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Hello! My name is Jemima, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congradulate you on completing this piece. I really enjoyed this piece, because of the unique topic. The transition music was perfect and the diction was very clear. Good Job!

Comment for "It's Not Easy Being Green"

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Hello! My name is Jemima, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congradulate you on completing this piece. I like this idea of choosing this topic. The diction was clear. I would suggest music to begin your piece the same way it is used to end the piece. Otherwise this piece was great. Good Job!

Comment for "MA-162 Voice of Caution"

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hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. I really enjoyed this piece. The diction was very clear, and the topic was unique to talk about. The transition music was very smooth and was used at the perfect time. Great Job

Comment for "The Future Sucks"

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hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This topic was acutally a great choice. The transition of playing the radio was really unique. My only construction would be to give time in between the different voices. You can fade in and out of people, instead of jumping from one voice to another. Other than that you did a excellent. Good Job!

Comment for "All you need is a wall"

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hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. First I would like to congradulate you on completing this piece. The topic was a great choice also. It helped show that Graffati is also a work of art. The diction was very clear which is a good sign. One thing you can add another time is more interviews, opinions, or narration. Other than that you did a nice piece. Good Job!

Comment for "A Night at Cleo's: The Queens"

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This piece is very interesting, and a unique topic to talk about. The background music was good. It transitioned at the right points and kept energy throught the piece. The diction was clear, along with the vox pops. Great Job!

Comment for "MA-162 Voice of Caution"

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I really enjoyed this piece. The diction was very clear, and the topic was unique to talk about. The transition music was very smooth and was used at the perfect time. Great Job!

Comment for "The Future Sucks"

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Hello! My name is Jemima and I work with PRX. This topic was acutally a great choice. The transition of playing the radio was really unique. My only construction would be to give time in between the different voices. You can fade in and out of people, instead of jumping from one voice to another. Other than that you did a excellent. Good Job!

Comment for "All you need is a wall"

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Hello! My name is Jemima and I work with PRX. First I would like to congradulate on you on completing this piece. The topic was a great choice also. It helped show that Graffati is also a work of art. The diction was very clear which is a good sign. One thing you can add another time is more interviews, opinions, or narration. Other than that you did a nice piece. Good Job!

Comment for "Teen Violence Hurts Everyone"

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Hello! My name is Jemima Williams, and I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. This topic was a smart choice, because it is a very touchy subject. The questions were on point, along with the responses. The length of the peice was decent, but next time try to stretch it out a bit. Also, adding background music would knock this piece up 2 levels! The dicton was clear, but sounded just a tad scripted. Otherwise, your piece was well thought out recorded. Good Job!

Comment for "Why Do Kids Drop Out of School?"

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hello! I'm making a few updates to my previous comment. I am a member of the Generation PRX Youth Editorial Board. I really enjoyed your piece. It held a great outline. The choosing of this topic was excellent, because this problem is hardly recognized. Oe thing you can work on next time is the clarification of your piece. The diction needs a little work, it sounded pretty scripted. The length of the piece was decent, bt try to get more interviews. There are three experts heard on this document, but only one who experienced it. Otherwise, this piece was highly productive. Good Job!

Comment for "Why Do Kids Drop Out of School?"

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Hello! My name is Jemima and I work with PRX. I really enjoyed your piece. It held a great outline. The choosing of this topic was excellent, because this problem is hardly recognized. One thing you can work on next time is the clarification of your piece. The diction needs a little work, it sounded pretty scripted. The amount of time was decent, but try to get more interviews. There are experts, but only one person who experienced this. Otherwise, this piece was highly productive. Good Job!