There are some great ideas embedded in this piece, I just think it needs to pick a direction (commentary/reporting) and tighten up its focus.
At first, I thought all the sound effects were a bit annoying, but that annoyance makes a clever point later in the piece.
Writing and production are fine with the exception of some inconsistent audio levels and some occasional distortion.

Eric Nuzum
Rockville, MD
June 30, 2004

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