Well, I thought the topic choice was impecable. It particularly appeals to an older adolescent age group but, also incorporates older generations because of the business aspects.

I was very put back by the pace of this peice. It seemed s l o w
and s t e a dy ; like your grandma's buick.

The reason I didn't turn it off?
The topic was so compelling that it fueled me to the end of the long duration "4 minutes and 49 seconds".

With a little editing work, other audio clips, opposing opinions, and a bit of love; I think this peice could go from "okay, but informative" to "great!".

It sounds like this was a "first stab" towards radio, but it sure is a good example of a great start.

This piece, while informative is a bit bland. Without using music it comes off as bland. The sound bytes are also too long even though the piece is short you loose the attention of the audience very fast. The average human attention span is about 2 seconds, which means you have that long to grab the audiences attention before they decide to listen to something else. With a few adjustments this piece could much better.