Awesome sounds, made your piece flow evenly! But you have to be very careful when using sounds, in your case the loudness of your background sound and the ?coolness? took away from what you were saying (a bit) because that is such a common tune. Also I would have liked it so much better to hear the actual sounds and comments of you during your journey to meet ?THE BATMAN?, not narration, my attention grabbed so quickly when you played sounds of you at the mall! Also your piece is very funny (depending on mass transit...). Also it?s really cool and kind of weird to hear a teenaged boy still trapped in a fantasy world, pretending to use super powers! Very funny GREAT JOB!