Comments for In Place and Out of Character

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Produced by Emily Feder

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Summary: Audio Portraits of three refugee families living in New York City
 

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Review of In Place and Out of Character

I find the voices of the refugees who tell their stories in this piece so rich, so fascinating, that they make for beautiful radio in and of themselves. In Place & Out of Character invites us to listen intently, to come and meet it. There is a lack of dramatic tension, an absence of polished acoustic stage-setting. The stories themselves are straightforward. They grow and fill the listener's mind with simple details that stick in the memory. This is a subtle piece, filled with the unique cadences of the human voice.

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Review of In Place and Out of Character

Like the legitimate theatre where an audience commits the willing suspension of disbelief, the invisible theatre of radio demands a commitment from listeners to create something greater in the space between "sent" and "received". But there's an obligation on the creator in the bargain, to set the scene -- physical, intellectual, emotional – into which they invite the audience.

"In Place and Out of Character", despite Will Sorrell's interspersed narration, seems "in character", but "out of place". The three vignettes deliver great personality on the part of the refugees, but the package isn't assembled in a way that ultimately inhabits a place with listeners.

The disconnect is a genetic legacy – these three 9-minute profiles were originally created to be accompanied by photographs and live theatre, in which milieu they would perform much differently.

Fine work by producer Emily Feder & crew, and wonderful audio, but somehow in this raw format it's not radio, it doesn't translate. There's not the storyline and direction we need to turn this from chatter on the subway to conversation from new real people we're meeting.

That said, Abibatu Hadiatu's segment has so much music in her words, it could nearly be played as song. And overall, the elements are professional and compelling enough that we can look forward expectantly to Feder's work produced specifically for broadcast.