
Piece Description
When we were very little, my parents used to bundle us into the car on summer mornings and take us to the beach where, in the rising light, my dad would make pancakes over a driftwood fire. This is an audio history of my deep affection for the beach.
Transcript
When we were little kids, my folks used to pry us out of bed before dawn on summer weekends, bundle us in the back of the Buick Estate Wagon, and drive us over the winding hazard that is California's Highway 17. I don't remember anything about the transition from bed to car, but I can imagine sitting in the back seat, watching a blur of trees go by. I can picture Santa's Village, a ramshackle theme park at the town of Scott's Valley where the road straightened out. There was a dinosaur park on the opposite side of the road - a giant made out of concrete peered through the trees and across four lanes into the elves workshop. I wonder if the elves thought they were hallucinating. We never stopped at either place, heading straight for the state park on the beach in Santa Cruz. Weather on the Pacific Coast is unpredictable at best in summer time. There's a strip of cold, wet, fog that likes...
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Traci Tong
Posted on June 19, 2007 at 10:52 AM | Permalink
Review of Ocean Elegy
Lot of potential for this audio postcard.
*Actual essay is only 5 minutes, the remaining 2 includes Elvis and ocean ambience.
High marks to narrator Pam Mandel for her perfect pitch read. Good cadence, inflection and emotion. Pacing a tad fast at times.
Audio postcards like these are fun to listen to especially when they include ambient sound.
However,it does sound odd to hear ocean amb behind Mandel's studio and echoey read. She needs a better studio to track.
And essay is a tad long.