The conversational tone helps guide the listener through this story. The producers also did a nice job bringing the sound of the story into the flea market.

This piece is a bit long and would benefit from a tighter edit. I think it would be stronger and have a better chance to keep listeners around 4-5 minutes.

I do like the girls voice and it is fun to hear them travel around the flea market and guide us with their thoughts.

This would make a good drop-in for a local news magazine or Weekend America.