Piece Comment

Review of In a Cornfield in Iowa


This piece is about Stuart and his bicycle ride across the country.
The narrative and journal entries are well written.
While the narrator adds perspective to the story, I want to hear more *of Stuart than *about him. It would have been good to at least have him read his own journal entries.
The highlights of the journey chosen
for the piece are fun and definitely
"off the beaten path", making it a fun ride.